Thursday, May 27, 2010

5 views thru hay[na]ku

forgetting
to reflect
no mirrors please

* * *

each
step is
two stumbles back

* * *

remove
my glasses
world softly blurred

* * *

mirror--
who is
that staring back

* * *

reading
hay[na]ku i
make a hay[na]ku

3 Comments:

At 9:04 PM, Blogger Jean Vengua said...

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At 9:09 PM, Blogger Jean Vengua said...

[2nd version]

blogs
are not
mirrors or apples

people
or communities
blogs are porn

pixies.
step back
shut the door

remove
these glasses
for a moment

faces
are fogged
who looks back

it's
hard to
tell or read

what
is in
an avatar's eyes

reading
an hay(na)ku
is also writing

is
an appearance
and a disappearance

 
At 10:56 PM, Blogger richard lopez said...

you had me, jean, at first line!

 

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