Really Bad Movies

Tuesday, November 08, 2011

should it be, too

our
reading be
forms of writing?

At 10:52 AM, Jim K. said...: i suspect the agenda behind
the short line is achieving
some intensity or drama in the
face of short attention spans
or something

i like it but
i take the page as
a serious border..
if there's a lot to
say things better thicken up

my instinct is to
break on intro first
then break on phrase
but then ramp out sometimes
to prime and pump

without
going
drip
drip
drip
forever

it's def. a play
on affecting the reading..

it?
might?
just get rid?
of the?
academic?
question lines sound?
...hehe